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Romantic Demon by lockstock, Della Stock Thanks to a: lockstock-Stock :iconlockstock: and Della-Stock :icondella-stock:


Stock Model :iconlockstock: lockstock
nude 74 [link]
nude 71 [link]
Hooves by :icondella-stock: Della-Stock
deer hooves: [link]



I hope you liked is a puzle girl with two images and make up

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horns by
freepik.es
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Impact is high here because of all that is unexpected--everything from the hooves to the details of the horns (literally from toe to head). I noted your comment about melancholy and there may be truth in trying to capture that sense of loss (which is how I gloss "melancholy.")

Some nitpicking: I would take some of the shine off the front hoof. Looks like she has had some "hooficure" which does not seem consistent with the succubus motif.

The horns would benefit from a slight adjustment up and back-not a major move, but something that might create a greater sense of "organic."

Bring a little more color into her lips--not much-just a little redder. The succubus seduced men in their sleep and her mouth needs to suggest this aspect of the lore.

I don't mean to be indelicate, but if she had less hair-ummm below (if you know what I mean), it would add dramatically to the image. Once more, this would play well to the lore of the succubus.

A touch of color from the "borrowed" arm would be helpful to bring everything together. Because this arm is lighter than the body, it suggests that something is amiss.

I think you are right to keep this image in a semi-classic pose/setting. Both work (e.g. the draperies of the background and the model's pose) to create a timelessness to this image. . .and a succubus is immortal, isn't she??

Wonderful and evocative start, but consider some of these suggestions.
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:iconwillfried59:
willfried59 Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2015
so nice!
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:iconfueledbypartii:
FueledbypartII Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
^^ Oh!! Thanks!! I glad you like ^^ she is so cute
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:iconhotlover70gmx:
hotlover70gmx Featured By Owner May 28, 2015
gorgeous...
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:iconfueledbypartii:
FueledbypartII Featured By Owner May 31, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
^^ Thanks ^^
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:iconwhyme777x:
WhyMe777x Featured By Owner May 19, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wow, surprisingly subtle for your usual style. Excellent work sir :D
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:iconfueledbypartii:
FueledbypartII Featured By Owner May 19, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'm glad you like it ^ ^
I liked the pose of the legs of a photo and an arm of another picture, my intention was to make a Renaissance painting of Eve (demon) with a background with plants and fruit trees. But when I finished the pose of the model, I found it more beautiful, if I removed the ornaments. Transmits peace and melancholy that was my intention ^^
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Paudraic Featured By Owner May 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Great job, the hooves sell it.
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:iconfueledbypartii:
FueledbypartII Featured By Owner May 19, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
;)
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Altair-E Featured By Owner May 18, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Really well done, pretty demon!
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:iconfueledbypartii:
FueledbypartII Featured By Owner May 18, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Demon or goddess ^^
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:iconaltair-e:
Altair-E Featured By Owner May 18, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I think it's only you who can tell :-)
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